很多学生的个人陈述设计是非常失败的，他们的思路是典型的中国思维，在文书写作上往往是大而全，希望在申请文书中体现自身所有的内容。故此，无论是小时候的把一分钱交给警察叔叔的经历，还是大学抗洪救灾，都会一股脑的往上放，这使得文章整体的布局出现严重的思路不突出，内容不鲜明的特点。其实，申请人为什么不“换位思考”，看看录取委员会想要什么呢？如果自己是录取委员会的一员，期待着学生的文书是什么样子？到底是一个宽泛的自述，还是针对专业的一个有针对性的个人表达？其实，个人陈述就是一个围绕专业的表达，录取委员会感兴趣的就是和专业有关的内容，至于其他的内容并不是他们所关心的。一个学习计算机的学生，他的计算能力和编程经验，录取委员会会非常感兴趣，至于他参加抗洪救灾没有，除非是他参与了抗洪救灾的计算机程序设计，录取委员就不会太感冒了。故此，个人陈述的整体布局要以录取委员会的喜好作为基础，录取委员会希望看什么，就写什么，如果没有兴趣的，就不要花任何力气去写了，这一点来说非常重要。

如何让使馆的工作人员看着舒服，不要花哨，但是要方便清晰，这个就是做材料。学校要求申请人提供文书材料，初衷还是想了解学生是什么样的人。尽管目前很多国内申请人为了上名校而一味地追求所谓的精英意识，在文书中夸大个人经历。但是对于绝大多数国外大学而言，学校最希望看到的还是学生能够通过4年的学习，成为一个真正的人，能够对社会有所贡献的人，而不是一群能够讲大话的毕业生。

对于留学申请书而言，有几点是必须要写的，例如自我介绍，说明自己的在学情况；决定留学的起因，为什么会选择这个国家，对这个国家的初步认识；专业的选择，学习什么专业以及学习这个专业的理由；父母或留学经费人对自己留学想法的支持和理解；出国留学后的打算；入学后的学习态度。写清楚了这些事情，才能让翻阅文书的人对你的印象深刻，加深对你的印象。

写留学申请书其实并不难，难的是我们如何改变自己的思维方式，把留学的理由考虑并写的充分，如何能让学校对你的申请书印象深刻，这才是写留学申请书要注意的。

英国留学申请书篇2

英国本科留学申请条件

1、学术条件：

因为学生选择专业不同，所以会有不同的要求，有很多英国大学预科要求申请者高中毕业，学习成绩良好，个别学校的个别专业方向会有具体的成绩要求，国内高二的学生也可以申请预科课程，东安格利亚大学等10所大学已经接受完成高二课程的中国学生；

2、语言要求：

雅思成绩在4.5~5.5，个别专业就比如说新闻专业，要求雅思成绩达到6.0。

英国本科留学申请流程

英国大学的本科一般通过ucas提交申请，也就是英国的大学和学院招生服务中心；需要准备的材料有申请表、ucas手册、申请表填写指南、回执卡、申请费付款单等。申请人需要先进入ucas的官网，然后选择自己喜欢的五门大学课程（医科和兽医选择四门），之后我们需要在ucas的申请网站上注册自己的账号，这个时候我们也需要填写详细的个人信息，包括你之前选定课程的唯一ucas代码；之后我们就可以添加自己的个人陈述了，最后一步就是支付自己的申请费，一所院校为18英镑，多所院校则为24英镑。

英国留学优势

1、学制短性价比高

英国大学的本科学制通常为3年，相比较国内本科可以节省一年的时间拿到学位证，对于学生来说无疑是非常好的选择。

2、文凭含金量高

英国是现代大学的发源地，英国的高等教育在世界上享受极高的声誉，英国大学排名在世界前100所的高校有将近20所，占世界前100大学里的五分之一。另外英国各大学和科研机构培养出众多的诺贝尔奖获得者，总人数位列世界第2。

3、签证条件相对宽松

根据英国使馆数据统计显示，中国留学生的签证通过率是96%，同其他国家相比，过签通过率高，且签证材料准备简便，让学生更快速地拿到签证。

4、优质专业众多

英国有不少专业都非常有名，例如商科、传媒、法学、工程学、教育学等等，这些都是英国留学申请热门优势专业，且很多院校的课程都获得了相关机构的专业认证，认可度非常高。

5、提升语言能力

出国留学除了可以接触国外教学资源外，差异化的生活环境和语言环境还能更好地提升留学生的语言能力；英国是英语的发源地，不少留学生在归国之后都因为出色的语言能力和环境适应能力得到了外企的认可，也有一些优秀学生获得国外工作的机会。

英国留学申请书篇3

i should like to apply for one of the scholarships that your department may be offering to students from other countries. would you please send me the necessary application forms and any further details about the scholarships.

i am a postgraduate student in beijing science and engineering university. i major in microelectronics engineering, and do some research work during my study years. i hope to have a further study and continue to do my research work if i succeed in obtaining the engineering scholarship.

enclosed please find two letters of recommendation and my score report card. thank you for your consideration. i look forward to your reply.

respectfully yours.

li ming

英国留学申请书篇4

1、不会讲故事

让你的文书像故事一样具有吸引力。很多人认也许不太看重这点，实际要想写好上硕士和博士的文书，你一样要会讲故事，因为只有故事才最有吸引力。

2、文书没有主线和逻辑

现在留学中介做的文书和大部分学生的文书都是一开始说自己是谁，然后下面说自己学习成绩如何，课外活动如何，然后又说自己做了哪些研究，最后就是我要申请啥学校和专业。

这种思路无论怎么写，都是普通的留学文书，是简历的重复，给审核者无法留下深刻的印象。好的文书一定是根据学生的情况，先挖掘连亮点和主线，确定思路，然后在某一、两个点上进行*剖析。

3、因为文化差异的问题，词不达意

例如你说你崇拜的人是屈原，但如果你不交代这个人是谁，老外是无法理解你到底在说什么。所以，申请不能站在自己的角度考虑问题，而是要更多站在阅读者的角度考虑你说的这个东西别人能不能理解。

4、喜欢使用华丽的辞藻和生词

文书最重要的不是辞藻，而是通过文书体现一个人的精神。使用华丽的辞藻，特别容易造成误解，其实作为国际学生，我们能够准确表达自己即可，不要瞎用连自己都无法准确把握的生词。

5、抄袭

每年都有学生因为抄袭申请文章被大学发现，给予重罚。现在一些大学有文章库，输入你的文章，尤其是留学中介为了节省时间而抄的文章，如果发现和库中的文章重合，学生就面临被重罚的危险。这个要非常小心。

英国留学申请书篇5

问：

英国留学申请书怎么写才能吸引人？

答：

一份完整的出国留学申请书，一定要说明自己申请该学校的原因，拿英国名校萨里大学为例：

1、展现出你对萨里大学的热爱

讲出热爱它的原因。你为什么要申请萨里大学啊？你觉得它的哪一点深深吸引你？是课程设施，文化特色，地理位置，师资、历史还是其他什么？

2、告诉对方你为什么适合这个学校

是因为萨里大学的特色与你的个人发展相契合吗？是你想通过在萨里大学的学习经历提升你哪方面的才能吗？

3、用案例证明自己符合它的招生要求

比如你的语言成绩，你的专业技能，你的过往经验等，尤其是那些跨专业申请的同学，一定要说明为什么你符合这个专业的招生要求。

附：英国留学申请书写作要领

以上三点是必须记住的要领，那么出国留学申请书的具体操作步骤有哪些呢？

1）材料完备

这些材料的准备根据三个要点来，包括你对什么课程感兴趣，你的个人长处和相关工作经验有哪些，你有哪些兴趣爱好，以及，你毕业后想做什么样的工作？你选择的课程会对你以后的工作有哪些帮助等。

2）格式规范

将陈述分为三段，用前言、中段、结论的结构将你的想法阐述清楚、明了。

3）语言简洁

ps的语言切忌口语化，也不能用英语之外的其他语言，必须保证语言的规范。尽量以最简洁的语句陈述。

4）切忌抄袭

这一点无需多说，ps是展示自我特色的途径，绝对不能抄袭他人。

5）时间充足

一篇优秀的出国留学申请书并非一蹴而就的，它应该是在你通过叫充足的时间准备、充足的时间组织语言、充足的时间调整结构之后完成的。

6）内容结合申请专业展开

写作留学申请书的时候，一定要结合自己的申请专业，尽量围绕专业申请要求展开。

7）逻辑清晰

以上出国留学申请书写作要点，适用于很多大学。当然，如果申请的大学有特殊的要求，也务必要按照学校的要求展开书写。

英国留学申请书篇6

program applied：marketing management

in a highly competitive environment，the ability to create competitive edgesover one's adversaries and to achieve ultimate victory in fierce competitionsdepends not so much on materials resources as on the mental factors ofintelligence and concepts. those concepts that can lead to new visions andperspectives and those approaches that can effectively solve problems will havethe greatest value. the overriding factor which ensures the eventualmaterialization of new concepts and gives rise to effective approaches ismanagement. as a branch of applied science，the science of management hascrucial value not only for developing countries like china which are makinguttermost efforts to catch up with the developed countries，but also for theleading multinational giants in the developed countries themselves. for a personlike me who has decided to pursue marketing management as my career objective，to sharpen my intellectual caliber，to understand the essence of management andto grasp important skills of management have become my greatest aspiration.

as a master's student specializing in marketing and enterprise strategies，iam very proud to report that i have made some encouraging research achievements.of the two research papers that i wrote concerning strategic development ofenterprises-enterprise strategic alliance based on resource complementarity andthe strategic orientation and countermeasures for chinese enterprises ininternational operations in the new millennium，the former has been published byeconomic tribune in sept. 20xx and the latter has been accepted for publicationby china economists in feb. 20xx. these two research papers are the fruition ofmy active involvement in a research project named study on chinese enterprises'cooperation-competition models in hyper-competitive conditions，which issponsored by china state natural science foundation (foundation project no.70140132)。 another paper entitled brand marketing：a competitive mode on ahigher level in modern economics has been published by contemporary finance& economics in november this year. those research achievements canunmistakably indicate my tremendous potential to perform much more ambitiousresearches in my future degree program and i am determined to develop thispotential to the fullest extent.

i completed my four-year systematic studies in engineering and managementscience as an undergraduate at the school of economics and management，beijinguniversity of aeronautics and astronautics. it is precisely this undergraduateeducation that has reinforced my determination to pursue marketing management asmy lifelong career. although as an undergraduate my understanding of somecourses cannot be described as profound (some might even be said to be rathersuperficial)，my learning of those courses nevertheless widened my ken ofknowledge and broadened my vision.

in order to further enrich myself，i availed myself of every opportunity ofacademic exchange both on campus and off campus. i shuttled among pekinguniversity，central finance and economics university，and china renminuniversity on my bicycle in order to attend lectures delivered by the country'sleading scholars and entrepreneurs. those lectures constituted an importantsupplement to my in-class training because they were immediately connected withthe realities of chinese society. i also benefited importantly from myextracurricular activities. as minister of the department of social practices ofthe school's students union，i planned and organized the school's festival ofthe art of management. i also canvassed pepsi company to sponsor ouruniversity's basketball league match. in launching those activities，i improvedmy organizational and managerial skills. in retrospection，my undergraduateprogram was most strengthened by my self-conscious attention to various appliedsubjects-higher mathematics，statistics and probability，linear algebra，operations research，etc. it can be said that my undergraduate education (inwhich my overall scholastic performance ranked top 4th in my class consisting of30 students) enabled me to make some basic preparations in theoretical knowledgeand in the application of mathematical tools.

from sept. 1998 to april 20xx，my employment with hisense group in qingdaocity，shandong province (one of the largest manufacturers of electricalappliances in china) was a major opportunity to practice what i had learned. thesecond year i joined the group，the most fierce price warfare happened tochina's electrical appliances industry. manufacturers reduced the prices oftheir products to unprecedented low levels in order to maximize their marketshare. as an act of market competition，the marketing department where i workedlaunched traveling expositions of hisense products. as one of the four keypersonnel of the department，i planned and organized a series of exhibitions inmost major cities in china. our one-year efforts achieved remarkable marketeffects. in shijiazhuan city，for instance，of a total of 30 brands，our salesof televisions and air conditioners accounted for 24% and 18% respectively in20xx. in that year's performance evaluation，i was awarded the group's modelemployee.

my understanding of marketing was enriched and modified by my 2-yearpractical work experience. to me，marketing was not merely composed of suchelements as product designing，promotion through advertising，pricing models，and distribution channels. it also encompassed the analysis of the behavior bothof your competitors and of consumers，studies in organization behavior，brandmanagement，and decision-makings. believing that a more systematic educationwould contribute to a more successful career，i went back to my alma mater inseptember 20xx and went on with a master's program in engineering and managementscience in order to gain knowledge on a higher professional level，to follow themost updated academic information，and to improve my managerial caliber.

backed by my work experience，my academic focus became better-defined and iwas more self-motivated in my studies. with a comprehensive coursework coveringadvanced mathematical planning，decision-making strategies，managementstatistics，and fuzzy mathematics，i achieved obvious improvement in theoreticalknowledge and in the application of tools. i developed broader perspectives andwas able to conduct my research from more advanced professional levels. mythesis，entitled a study of enterprises' strategic alliances based on ananalysis of resource complementarity，presented a wholly novel explanation ofcorporate alliances from the perspective of resource integration，a perspectivewhich differed fundamentally from the conventional view held by most scholarswhich explained the necessity and justification of corporate alliance from theangle of transaction cost and value chain.

instead of feeling contented with my high gpa for the master's program (3.6)，i have come to realize how much there is still for me to learn in the field ofmanagement，especially in marketing. most universities in china treat marketingpurely as a theoretical course，with neither case analysis nor opportunities forstudents to practice the theories they have learned. in terms of curriculum，studies in marketing psychology and individual behavior have hardly beenundertaken. moreover，the lack of analytical tools has resulted in insufficientanalysis of the market feedback. realizing that such deficiencies can scarcelybe overcome within a short period of time，i believe that a more successfulcareer must be pursued through a ph.d. program outside china，ideally in afirst-rate university in the united states.

with my undergraduate and graduate background in engineering and managementscience，i would like to focus on one of the following areas in your ph.d.program：a. marketing management; b. behavioral approaches to marketing orconsumer behavior; and c. channels of distribution. i have also drawn up mytentative career objective. i will complete my doctoral program by undertakingextensive researches and carrying out some specific projects. after obtaining mydegree，i will seek some teaching experiences in an american university whilecontinuing with advanced researches on the latest research topics. in this way ican keep developing my academic aptitudes. after accumulating sufficientteaching and research experience，i will seek a teaching position in aprestigious university in china where i will share with my future students andcolleagues my research findings and the knowledge i have acquired in the unitedstates. i hope to develop myself ultimately into a leading specialist inmarketing and management who can contribute to bringing chinese scholarship inthis field onto a more advanced level.

cmu's ph.d. program in computer science is heavily integrated with researchactivities and is designed to nurture people with raw talent and intellect in anenvironment which permits them thorough immersion in research and coursework.the program promises to produce well-educated researchers and future leaders incomputer science. i am very excited over this wonderful vision because such aprogram offers me a basis to translate my dreams into realities. without such aprogram，many of my dreams will remain mere fantasies.

xxx

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